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Fallen

March 15th, 2010, 2:00 am

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This is how the entire cast gets re-introduced
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Reply Angel85, March 15th, 2010, 2:05 am

This is my first real attempt at a dramatic internal monologue. Which I made up off the top of my head at 3 AM so it probably sucks. Sure, N has been afraid on some level since he was left alone in the subspace maze, but we all know there is no REAL sense of dread when you play a video game, but we aren't playing games anymore, are we?

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User's Comments:

Reply Djoing, March 15th, 2010, 4:01 am

My guess... hologram hostages. They're not real.

Reply sega-tendo-com2.0, March 15th, 2010, 6:47 am

*Cue powers from heaven* This is obviously that moment where he gains the power to defeat all four bad guys!

Reply Aurax (Guest), March 15th, 2010, 11:11 am

he's now an emo! ...What?

Reply Kris the Demon, March 15th, 2010, 10:21 pm

The dialogue itself is okay but it comes on a little too quickly, I think that Captain N (does he have a name) would be too shocked at first and there would be a short pause, like show him shaking and falling to his knees or something. I hope this makes sense.

Otherwise I think the internal dialogue is good, good choice of words.

Reply Angel85, March 15th, 2010, 11:15 pm

@ Kris the Demon Captain N is played by me, so his given name is Angel. I thought of drawing more of a lead to the despondent panel, but my hand was tired and the update was already late and I had a hard time getting the pose right...I'll improve on my panel placement in the next update.

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